Saturday, February 11, 2017

Lame Excuses Comments

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You are looking for a lame excuse
to smile,
to show you are happy,
by a false laughter,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 March 2018

A great and meaningful poem that motivates.Yes, we should live with the truth. The last stanza expresses it all.

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 February 2017

If translation is so beautiful, how much beautiful would be the original poem, but I don't know Hindi.

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Jaishree Nair 11 February 2017

Hiding behind the veil of lies and excuses to get into the good books of others.To be honest with oneself is extremely necessary to be truly happy.Nice thought.Thank u for sharing

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