Tuesday, July 21, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

I swore, when my wife took off one night
That I'd never love again,
She'd left a note by the candlelight:
'I've been seeing other men! '
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David Lewis Paget
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Kranthi Pothineni 20 August 2009

Well the narration is really good as you said. The flow and feel is moving.The way you brought out the title in between and pain of love is captured very well. Crafted expressively.

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Ann Beard 21 July 2009

Great story David I was hooked. Kind regards Ann

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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