Friday, November 22, 2013

Lakeside Veiw Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.0

The Lake was aflame in the bright morning sun,
The Trees whispered, telling to run.
I took a step, then another,
Quickened pace in both fear and haste.
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Brookelyn Walker
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Khairul Ahsan 23 November 2013

'I took a step, then another, Quickened pace in both fear and haste. The waves lapped at the dock, ' Nice expression.

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