Saturday, September 20, 2008

Lakeside Afternoon. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

As warmth takes ahold, with Autumn dispensing
Brown-leafing clutter around the Lakeside,
Dragonflies sensing cool days approaching
Slice, noisily buzzing the air, then take hide.
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Fay Slimm
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Ernestine Northover 20 September 2008

This sounds just like my local park at a weekend. Great informative poem and a painting being created with every verse. Excellent. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Not a member No 3 20 September 2008

You had me smiling all the way through this one's multitude of interlocking scenes, described with humour and the sharp eyes and angles of a fine poet... Nice work Fay xxx

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Kris Smith 20 September 2008

Fay I am there with you, lost in your poem with all going on lovely thankyou Chris 10 x

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm
in Cornwall U.K.
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