Thursday, February 21, 2013

Lake Swimming Comments

Rating: ★4.0

Streamlined hands spear the lake, cascading a rhythm repeated
Smooth undulation descends with each stroke I take
A perpetual movement where my weight is defeated
Streamlined hands spear the lake
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Stevie Taite
Leaving Meditation swimming
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Nader Baheri 25 February 2013

fabulous.swimming lake really would be so relaxing.~nb

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Kelvin Owusu 25 February 2013

nice write enjoyable read, loved the second stanza

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
Stevie Taite
Stevie Taite
Kent, England
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