Sunday, May 14, 2006

Lake Scene With Ducks Comments

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For a moment let’s not consider
the beauty of the mallard
paddling, paddling on the lake.
Overlook her irridescent shawl
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Sonny Rainshine
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Nibedita Deb 14 May 2006

Lovely poem, sir. I liked the ending all the more than any other. Beautiful images with originality. Keep writing! ! Regards, N.D.

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Sandra Erickson 14 May 2006

Bill: there is something so sensuous, so seductive about this piece, aside ffrom the obvious beauty of the images. Wonderful! Thanks (I needed that) Sandra

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