Thursday, June 28, 2018

Lake Saif-Ul-Mulook Comments

Rating: 5.0

Usually the animals are obedient and trustworthy for us,
We train them to work for us and they are always helpful,
We develop in them certain habits, they are used to with it,
Performing their duty daily they are nice and beautiful.
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Kelly Kurt 29 June 2018

The poem is lovely. The backstory is informative and the photo is incredible.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 June 2018

LOVELY POEM STORY LOWER EXPLANATORY DETAILS ARE TOO LONG AS TO WEAKER SIGHT NOT DOES TO ME I BELONG I will read it some day later on AAJ KEE MULAKAAT... LET'S KEEP IT GHODEY TALUK....HORSE BACK- - ERE HE KICKS BOTH OF US SALLAMS SIR

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2018

Animals are more faithful than men! The first stanza is my favorite stanza! Liked the poem....10

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Khalid Saifullah 29 June 2018

I have heard this tale now I read this poem. It's a wonderful poem.

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Khalida Bano Ali 29 June 2018

A lovely poem on Lake Saif-ul-Mulook.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

Usually the animals are obedient and many trust them. God is always attentive but man forgets submissions soon is very true. We shall not forget God at all. Prince Saif-l-Mulook and the fairy Badi-ul-Jamal are symbols of love and we are glad to know about them. Dutiful horse is a symbol of friendship and such horse is very loyal. If he violates then man is behind the reason of his anger due to mistreatment. An Amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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Red Soul 28 June 2018

This is a breathtakingly beautiful poem Mr Jawad. The tale of love and your poem both mesmerised me. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem: -)

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