Friday, March 7, 2008

Lake Pend Orielle Comments

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The sapphire blue waves on the shore
Caused the seagulls to want to soar,
The evergreen trees waved hi
As the wind whistled by,
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Rachel Rudland
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C.R. Clark 09 March 2008

A very nice write, Rachel. I'm glad you told us how to pronounce the name of the lake. I would've had trouble with that one. thanks Richard

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 March 2008

short but visually rich...............

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