Lake House. Poem by valentino montanna

Lake House.



Lake house.

You told me to trust and wait,
and for a long time I kept faith.
A feeling of you belonging to my soul,
made me spin my mind and lose control.
My heart got weak, couldn't wait much longer,
cause my love for you was growing stronger.
I did something I wasn't mend to do,
I crossed the street, to get closer to you.
I dint see it coming, dint see the car,
suddenly it hit me and it made a scare.
Now the memory will slowly fade,
and forgotten will be the dreams we made.
As faraway as our lake house now may seem,
I still take a visit, ……….. if only in a dream.

Val.01-04-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daryl Cheng 18 August 2009

very nice. a few typos here and there though? 'Now the memory will slowly fade, and forgotten will be the dreams we made. As faraway as our lake house now may seem, I still take a visit, ……….. if only in a dream.' brings out the emotions well.

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