Thursday, September 14, 2006

Lake Couchiching Comments

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We stood clothed,
on the edge of the dock,
lusting for the murky water,
trying to find words in the aqueous ink.
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Tara Teeling
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Ron Dragano 18 September 2006

I like the honesty, the un-pc, I thought it was going to be, I thought another celebrating sensuality, or woman triumphant over some hang up or some man or something, but no, none of that, and minus dreary fantasy, just the true stones, chipped or slimed or rhymed of a world we know, undeluded, undeluted reality.

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