Lake Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Hi Rose, Another precious metaphoric piece of work, always the frame restrict our freedom, where we can reach the full freedom? 10/10 with Regards

Has no full freedom......significant. anjandev Roy.

A beautiful poem! Like a bird in a cage, the water surrounded by land on all sides cannot flow freely like a stream or a river. The lake though with enormity of water has restricted movement and is stagnant! Stagnation sets in all lives where the freedom is restricted. A Very meaningful haiku and a sure 10... Rose Marie!

first we congratulate you for being the 338 on top 500 poets. secondly we want to thank you for sharing this amazing poem with us

Oh! I never saw a lake or pond that way. Calm and trapped. No freedom, no play. This is elegant, original, and symbolic You have set my mind to spinning with thought. Awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++ and onto my fav list

Excellently penned! Thank you for sharing this lovely piece!

Very exact attribute of lake.Nice crafting.

Brilliant work.....thank u....

what amazing paradox we can find here between: /calm/ and /no full freedom/ this deep short poem guides us to the philosophy of life; indirectly saying: always people struggle to find perfectness, and that is what makes us so harmonic and sociable. excellent for this wonderful masterpiece of work with a big 10+ and onto fav list

wide basin X calm, . motionless water X no full freedom.