Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Lagi Ik Umr! Comments

Rating: 3.5

Lagi ik umr lekin
phir samajh mein aa gai mujh ko
mukhalif samt chalti
her hawa batlaa gai mujh ko
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Shahzia Batool
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M Asim Nehal 15 November 2015

Kya baat hai......Umda ghazal hai.

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Muhammad Ali 07 January 2014

ye ek sad poem hy. ye poem sachi b hy. haqiqat udas q krti hy! shayad 'umeed' lagany waly udas hoty hn. or haqiqat bhoolny waly bhi. m ny bachpan me ek sher parha tha. 'm Tujh sy na maangu, to na maangu ga kisi sy. m Tera hun, Tu mera Khuda, mera Khuda hy'

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Passionate Reader 18 August 2013

Indeed a meditating message, something to ponder upon! ! ! Your poetry is always with a strong message. while reading this poem, i felt as if you have written down my feelings here because i feel the same way :))) so hats off to you dear poet for presenting this notable message in a beautiful way. The last lines grabbed my whole attention and i just can't help reading them again and again :)))

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Payal Parande 11 August 2013

Thousands of candles can be lighted from a single candle, and the life of the candle will not be shortened. Happiness never decreases by being shared. an inspirational write by a brilliant poet.... bravo didi

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Yasmin Khan 08 August 2013

Great inspirational write...a precious message(Zanagi ka saliqa yehi hey)

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Poet's Fan 08 August 2013

wish i had its english translation, , , : (

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Ramesh Rai 07 August 2013

saharay dhoondna chhorro saharay baantnaa seekho keh yeh roshan haqeeqat he sahara dhoondnay waalay sada tanha hi rehte hen beautiful write

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Beautiful Urdu poem. Loved reading it...

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Shahzia Batool 07 August 2013

Yes, You have! I wish time could give you a chance to translate the whole poem! thank you so much!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2013

Another beautiful Urdu poem. saharay dhoondna chhorro (Don't seek support) saharay baantnaa seekho (Learn to provide support) Beautiful rendering. Have I caught the meaning? Thank you.

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