I wanna undo things,
I hate myself, just being a bunch of
diseases and nothing else.
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Its a work of very mature mind. At your age its amazing you can write this way. Im surprised at your ability to enter a woman's heart n probe it so well. You have portrayed a woman's misery with empathy n compassion. Reminds me of D. H. Lawrence's writings. Bold n unconventional.10
It's bold and beautiful, an unique poem, I was touched, I was moved.
Thank you very much Akhtar sahab. This is what I always hope as a poet - to move my readers.. Thank you.
Vengeance breeds more vengeance. Deserved or not, retaliation is a reaction to the wrongs others have committed on us. A great write Souren as usual