Monday, August 31, 2015

Lady With A Beautiful Smile Comments

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I see a lady smile.
Is it for me,
or her daughter?
Intoxicating.
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JJ Evendon
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Darlene Walsh 22 September 2015

A nice story with a big question. Smiles are always nice, but I guess they can be confusing especially if: 'Is it for me, or her daughter? ' Which means: 'I'm not sure! ' When not sure what a smile means, it is probably best to wait a little to see what's next? And yes, smile back, it probably can't hurt. I'm curious to hear more about this story?

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Kelly Kurt 02 September 2015

Beautiful poem, JJ. It can never hurt to smile back.: -)

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