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A sublime start with a nice poem, Afeefa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

Very nice poem indeed, having so much emotion has been expressed

Good script but poor in expressions keep it up you will fill soul in it

Treasured moments with the warmth of love, not to be forgotten.

Wow, your story is captivatingly interesting. It has a sense of suspense which forced me to read further and to love it. It reminds of one of my poems not yet to be published soon. God bless you

The poem brings love and hope to my heart. Thanks for sharing, Afeefa

I have long thought that mothers should be world leaders. Thanks for sharing, Afeefa

Well written poem :) Enjoyed reading it :)