Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Lady Of The Ocean Comments

Rating: 4.3

Toes curled in the grains of sand,
The Lady of the Ocean
Holds the power of the sea
There, in her outstretched hand.
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Argentine Tango
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Søren Valentine 28 January 2013

I really enjoyed the way you incorporated nature (and the sea no less) into your writing. I might be a tad biased towards the ocean and beaches but still, very good job! Enjoyed it very much. :)

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Vikrant Jog 25 January 2013

The way you have painted the essence of the nature is commendable. I loved this work.

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Rinku Tiwari 03 January 2013

Great line with lovely mean: -* Happy New Year

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Saadat Tahir 02 January 2013

Lovely lines...similes literaly dance with the surf Enjoyed Hpy new year

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