Toes curled in the grains of sand,
The Lady of the Ocean
Holds the power of the sea
There, in her outstretched hand.
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The way you have painted the essence of the nature is commendable. I loved this work.
Lovely lines...similes literaly dance with the surf Enjoyed Hpy new year
I really enjoyed the way you incorporated nature (and the sea no less) into your writing. I might be a tad biased towards the ocean and beaches but still, very good job! Enjoyed it very much. :)