Lady Of The Moon Comments

Heya! This is such a beautiful poem! Excellent use of personification- I'll never be able to look at the moon in the same way again! Your poetry rocks, xXx

Good poem. I would like to point few areas where I feel you need to concentrate: 1. Your expressions lack energy and intensity. Plz remember it's a poem and not a short story. 2. Your topic, it lacks the touch of reality. 3. The metre of your poems which is very random. Needs absolute conentration. Thank you. N.D.

You seem to like writing poems on the moon and I really like them! I love the way you referred to the moon as a goddess. You should keep writing. Have you just started to write poems?