Today I talked
to the old lady
who lives across the way
she said she died
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The title drew me in and i'm glad it did. i really enjoyed the twists and turns and the final part gave me goose bumps... tyvm karen
Dave, post that on my blog at betterthingsbegin.com called God's Book and thx.
Great poem, could be many of us have lived before, who knows? .
Who knows, we may all be dead without realizing it! ! Great write Dave, love it.
Dying is like coming to the end of a long novel-you only regret it if the ride was enjoyable and left you wanting more. such a great story you have wrote sir....the hardness we feel inside to let go of things which ended long time ago cause deep down we never wanted it to go......another brilliant write from a brilliant man splendid... thank you for sharing this wonderful piece sir love, payal
Wow! Amazing poem/story; I love it!