Friday, August 24, 2012

Lady Of The Lake 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw the old lady
again today
the one who lives
across the way
...
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Dave Alan Walker
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 August 2012

The person has taken the right decision to take care of his/her daughter instead of getting enlightened himself/herself. If every parent thinks this way and avoid all distractions, this world will be a better place for future generations! Nice poem, Dave!

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Smoky Hoss 27 August 2012

Ah yes... this one glows with the beauty of the light upon your soul. Nice, very nice.

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Eric Cockrell 25 August 2012

as long as you there nurturing your daughter, you're in the light!

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Valerie Dohren 24 August 2012

Beautiful poem Dave, let's hope there is light on the other side.

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Heather Wilson 24 August 2012

Keep watch over your daughter Dave, far more important, great poem.

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Knight Fizzstorm 24 August 2012

A riveting heartfelt poem. I commend you.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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