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She dances swiftly through your ears
Precious melodies brushing away all of your tears
Her voice is as sweet as honey
It makes the greyest of days seem sunny
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Judith and the Crow recommended you. I like your poem. My only doubt is that the second line is too long and disturbs the fine rhythm of the rest of the piece. I think I'd lose precious memories. The overall content is very good and I shall be reading more of your poems soon.
It says precious melodies not memories lol but it does talk about losing all your worries and pains that just means whatever it is thats stressing you out. Thanks for the read much appreciated! .
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7/30/2025 7:30:48 AM # 1.0.0
Don't you just love that music can make or break your mood. I have breakup songs I can't listen too and feel good songs I'm always listening to :)
Music is way to a womans heart that's why I play guitar xD