Sunday, November 9, 2008

Lady Luck Comments

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(dedicated to Alison Cassidy)

In soft fabrics
That fall effortlessly
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Jim Norausky 07 February 2009

This poem flows with the 'soft fabrics' Very contemporary feel. Nice.10 here. Jim

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

I like the idea of using music to inspire your poetry, this is very good, thanks Lynda x

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Fay Slimm 10 November 2008

Beautifully worded and very commanding. The length of the pice is just right and I like the use of music as a source.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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