Friday, October 16, 2020

Lady Luck... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gambled my last silver dollar's,
On the spinning of this wheel.
Will I now win or lose,
Only Lady Luck can soon reveal...
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Shaun Cronick
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Soran M. H 17 October 2020

A simple heads or tails, That's what my life's become. Unpaid debts with these gangsters, Flipping a coin for their fun...

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Dominic Windram 17 October 2020

The trials of many a gambler are wonderfully encapusulated in this dramatic monologue Shaun. I like the way it ends...creates real suspense..will he win or lose? It's a 'wish gambling was fun, but inevitably it's not' inspired five from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 October 2020

A wonderful poem with a great message. Engaging in a game of chance is always a disadvantage. We will just end up at the losing end. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Top Marks and to my Poem List.

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