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As Eve was sired from Adams rib!
She was nigh close to his sweet heart
She knew all secrets of that heart!
She loved the hugging of his heart.
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This is a beautiful poem on nature, love and romance having stunning expression and nice collocations. This poem is painted by a lovely story with nice theme. How society has departed from nature and has taken artificial means has been inscribed in this poem touchingly. Thank u dear Josey for sharing this lovely gem.10
Thank you Mani sir, Your valuable comment gives me great pleasure and encouragement, Thank you once again, I will try to be more active in the pursuit of poetry.
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8/2/2025 3:26:47 PM # 1.0.0
Though the story is adulterated with the poet's imagination, it can be viewed as a plausible version! The long and short of it is that when man deviates from the original scheme devised by God, sin and misery enter the world! The poet's notes highlight the modern phase of life! A poem with a lofty theme!
Valsa Madm, Thnk you for your valuable opinion and encouragement.