Friday, April 17, 2009

Lady In Waiting. Comments

Rating: 5.0

For many long moons she had yearned for love.
Weeping deep rivers of tears, she then baited
Her breath and pleasantly smiled, proving
That patience, if honed, can produce wait
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Fay Slimm
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Sue Sie 17 April 2009

Sounds like some compromising and peace has been found...10++ A great write as always Fay...thanks for this Sue

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Fiona Davidson 17 April 2009

Lovely write Fay...your words as always simply flow....Fi 10+++

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Tsira Goge 17 April 2009

Fay, Very beautiful a poem, the woman in white and with hope...10... Thank you, dear... Tsira

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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