Monday, June 22, 2009

**lady In Pink Comments

Rating: 4.5

The pink of the sunset was like the droop
From the shoulders like the folds in soft
Rays gleamed like diamonds in gold red
From the below sand white was the skirt
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Catrina Heart 22 June 2009

An evening with music will she adore the night Mushrooms and prawns and dances like fish With smooth flexion will her lips on the chain She but knows how to love from fairy’s land ------ wow! ! ! such a great and fabulous description of a lady in pink.................10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 June 2009

'Her hand for the kiss before wine of madness Her legs like widening clayman’s sculpture Between the legs succulent petals and butterflies She had the mounds of ice with tips transparent' Lovely composition with amazing metaphors.

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Reshma Ramesh 22 June 2009

you paint a beautiful picture sadiq.......

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