Thursday, September 1, 2016

Lady Bliss Comments

Rating: 4.8

I did that when she was a miss
And I was content with a kiss
Now with other old men
My staring at bold women
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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it.

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Rajnish Manga 02 September 2016

I have also been inspired by both the veteran poets. Please take a look: A game is played within rules; With all the right kind of tools; How a miss is kissed, When wife is missed, U got to b cautious unlike fools.

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Nosheen Irfan 02 September 2016

This is so lovely. The wit n humor is unmistakable. A solid penning.

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Kelly Kurt 01 September 2016

I do not think I have seen you pen a limerick before, but this is an excellent one with your famous wit and charm

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Abduhoo Salamath 01 September 2016

woow.. what a funny poem....excellent...thanks for sharing..

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 September 2016

Both the limricks are interesting and wonderful.

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