A beautiful flower
Blooming in a sunny world
Twinkling like a star in the sky
Chaste in mind and body
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Wonderful. Empathetic and compassionate, without being stilted or flowery.
You made your point very clear in a clever way of explaining it. This is also an intresting and delicate subject to talk about and i think that u managed that very well. Over all it was a great piece of work! :)
A good poem and I interested it.