LADIES AND MEN
The window box looks down below
To the avenue where young ladies pass
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Must return the grin, whole entire. Congrats on the member poet of the Day,
I didn't like this poem: it made me kinda angry? ? ? Stirred up some really annoying emotions! However it seemed to have been written in an insightful manner.
Absolutely awesome Poem! Very well done sir. I think you captured the nature of the human animal quite elegantly...
A keen eye on the avenue where ladies pass! A critical appraisal of women!
Summer's glow.... congrats on being chosen....a big 10++++++
a nicely descriptive poem of daily goings on under the warmth of the summer's sun? ...........well penned
Thank you, Susan. You're an honest woman. And a perspicacious one too. I wish you the best of everything. John
You have quite the poet's eye, capturing the flash of glances in the everyday, often unnoticed world rushing by. Thanks for the peer inside. Well done! As a New Yorker myself, I relate to the pictures you paint ever so vivid. PEACE
For the female eye is always hungrier very well said I have toured USA vast and other world cities fast and i also have come to the same conclusion men love lower lips women mostly upper come my dear poet let's have supper AH LOL OR RFLOL American style