Sometimes, somewhere, somehow,
Ladies are the back born for a growth of man,
But sometimes, somewhere, somehow,
They destroy the growth,
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To some, somewhere, somehow, Ladies are born bold, Ladies are good decision makers, Ladies are polite. Ladies are vision of the child....a nice gratitude to women.
I can see that it was a terrible struggle for you to express yourself in English. I can't understand how you can write: Ladies are the back born for the growth of man! The line doesn't make any sense! Now, had you written in your traditional tongue you would have expressed yourself better. Poemhunter is a snare. Most dangerous are those poets who try to flatter you. They write bad poetry and they don't know what a good poem is. I wish you all the best. But if you continue to waste time writing in English on PH, you might go crazy. Many of the poets here are addicted to third-rate poetry and fourth-rate praise.
Wider than traditional outlook. Good write. Keep writing.
Ladies and Gents, both are complements of each other. I need her and she needs me. Jointly we can perform amazing magics.
Man and woman both are responsible for each others success and failure, we care interdependent, a good family depends on their mutual compatibility, everything starts at home if we happy at home the same we spread and hive others, ofcourse women power is unpredictable, thanks for the share, dear poet
Very enlightening thoughts within your poem, they do apply to both men and women at the same time. There is good and bad in both genders, showing the one side regarding women, made me think of the men who are like that also. Great poem! Enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn
A woman can build in love and destroy in hate! She is ambivalent.... While a loving woman turns a pillar of support to her man and family, a bad woman can prove a curse to the whole community! A nice poem on the twin side of women!
Verily, a lady is a builder and also a destroyer and the and the same applies to a man.
yes, ladies can do miraculous deeds, nice poem thanks for sharing
Ladies are born bold/Ladies are good decision makers/Ladies are polite/Ladies are vision of the child....great tribute to all ladies of the world! A magnificent poem.........10