Sunday, January 1, 2017

Ladder (Of Success) Comments

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M.J. Lemon
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2022

Loved this perceptive three-liner. Top score dear poet. Wish you a happy, prosperous, eventful and joyful new year 2023 in advance!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 June 2019

A great philosophical poem is so aptly and meaninglyfully delineated. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thank you my dear madam.

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Loke Kok Yee 20 April 2018

Those born with a silver spoon ride on lifts and escalators. Thanks Mj

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Mj Lemon 20 April 2018

Great observation, Loke! I think everybody feels like there's been at least one escalator ride in life....but why does that only or always involve the downward move? Thanks so much, Loke

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Valsa George 08 October 2017

There are only three possibilities, either go up to the top or come down to the bottom or get stuck somewhere in between! When I read your poems, I feel getting stuck in the tangle of meanings! You are a profound philosopher!

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Mj Lemon 08 October 2017

Valsa, too kind! Thank you so much.

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Unwritten Soul 17 June 2017

This left me thinking, well you are right again...it just like reality! careful in every step, because if we chose wrong step, it just not stuck, we tumble down....yes we will rise again but with pain...so go ahead and clear your mind of where we are heading to....heeyyyyaahhhh (sounds like cowboy) hahahahahahaha...that part is just to joke around :)

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Mj Lemon 17 June 2017

Thanks, Soul! Ahhhhhh, the cowboy crashing to earth. Now I wonder. Is the falling or idling on the stretch worse? Thanks again, my friend.

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Bri Edwards 11 June 2017

i've never been on a 'ladder of success', so i wouldn't know. every time i read grook on your site, i think gook, a real turnoff. ; ( bri :)

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Mj Lemon 12 June 2017

Thanks, Bri....and read- - -slowly- - -. I return to the saga of Cliff and Sheila...I expect no ladders involved! ? ! .

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Richard Wlodarski 24 March 2017

Brilliance in succinctness. No stuck on the stretch. Reach as high as you can. And then stretch yourself even further. Reach for the sky! Touch the angels. Thank God. And keep on walking. Higher. And higher. Until you reach Heaven. And then thank God. In Person! Another almighty 10, M.J.!

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Mj Lemon 25 March 2017

Thank you so very much Richard. I think your words are a near-haiku, and a great one.... No stuck on the stretch. Reach as high as you can. And then stretch yourself even further..

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2017

Brevity is the hallmark of this poem. Volumes spoken in few words. Beautifully done.

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Mj Lemon 19 January 2017

Thank you so much, Geeta.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 January 2017

Stretch! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 19 January 2017

To the heavens! Thank you so much, Edward.

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Sister Frances 10 January 2017

Well written...my ladder is missing some steps :)

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Mj Lemon 13 January 2017

Thank you, Sister Frances. I think I may be in need of the whole ladder....

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Susan Williams 06 January 2017

Stuck cuz I looked down. Freezes me in place every time. But if I look up I get a crick in my neck. You know what, that LADDER OF SUCCESS is just not for me- -I think I'll just go for a good ride instead and smell the sage.

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Mj Lemon 06 January 2017

Susan, That ride could actually be the top of the ladder. Thanks so much for reading.

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