I am not this…I am not this!
Screaming, he fell into the deep abyss,
Its silence cold, blankness dark and vast
Befitting place for incorrigible lunatics
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a good poem piece...words though turbulent create no uneven vortex anywhere...flow fluently in good rhythmic style...an absorbing read 10
read, good. please read some of my new poem. I wants your view
This is truly wonderful, a fine command over language and lovely theme!
an excellent work indeed, nicely put together in rhymical way and rep. in it which is alnost mystyle of write and i luv that way....well done seema 10+
The tempo/ryhm/rythm/thoughts ammazing indeed seema! ........10/10
tremendous poeticism, death the great leveller of everything mundane, of sensual and detached soul, and that is the beauty of Death, the ultimate truth of Life,
A sparkling poem with a fine tempo on all the lines...got an enormous job here. a 10.
essence of Madhwar's dwaitic philosophy...great writing