Wednesday, September 24, 2008

***laconic Voids! *** Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am not this…I am not this!
Screaming, he fell into the deep abyss,
Its silence cold, blankness dark and vast
Befitting place for incorrigible lunatics
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Seema Aarella
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rajagopal haran 02 October 2008

essence of Madhwar's dwaitic philosophy...great writing

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Kesav Easwaran 25 September 2008

a good poem piece...words though turbulent create no uneven vortex anywhere...flow fluently in good rhythmic style...an absorbing read 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 September 2008

read, good. please read some of my new poem. I wants your view

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Koyel Mitra 24 September 2008

This is truly wonderful, a fine command over language and lovely theme!

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Aijaz Asif 24 September 2008

an excellent work indeed, nicely put together in rhymical way and rep. in it which is alnost mystyle of write and i luv that way....well done seema 10+

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 September 2008

The tempo/ryhm/rythm/thoughts ammazing indeed seema! ........10/10

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R.k Das 24 September 2008

tremendous poeticism, death the great leveller of everything mundane, of sensual and detached soul, and that is the beauty of Death, the ultimate truth of Life,

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C T Heart 24 September 2008

A sparkling poem with a fine tempo on all the lines...got an enormous job here. a 10.

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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