An intriguing piece; I do find it a bit ambiguous, given the terseness of your poem; perhaps if you provided some background or your inspiration, then your intent would be clearer.
-Joe Breunig,
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
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An intriguing piece; I do find it a bit ambiguous, given the terseness of your poem; perhaps if you provided some background or your inspiration, then your intent would be clearer. -Joe Breunig, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory