Saturday, May 13, 2006

Lacking All Rhyme Or Reason Comments

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lacking all rhyme or reason
skating through darkness
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Hugh Cobb
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kskdnj sajn 18 May 2006

Hugh this piece was clever and perhaps will take me a few reads to insure the benefit of knowledge it carries, but enjoyed the wholeness, the humanity, the spirituality, and of course the stanza about mistaken perceptions through sensory and illusion. For I am forever the queen of delusions. :) Enjoyed.

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having those dolls you mentioned helped illustrate that portion of the poem for me. this is a meditative feast - so much to ponder and its hopeful, awakened conclusion makes good dharma indeed.

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Ballerina With Fins 13 May 2006

This beautiful; phantasmagorical almost; but very striking. A fantastic poem.

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William Jackson 13 May 2006

Very interesting. Great final summation of thought at the end. Great poem and great read.

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