Thursday, September 24, 2020

Lack Of Emotions Comments

Rating: 5.0

She said, when a couple breaks up
In public, few men if any cry
She looked at me with a puzzled look
Then asked, can you explain why?
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Ray Hansell
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L Milton Hankins 24 September 2020

Hey Ray, I really enjoyed this poem. I've often thought about the differences in emotion between men and women. I liked the fact that the last word of the first stanza rhymes with the last word of the third stanza. Interesting.

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