Wednesday, December 16, 2009

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One late spring day me and Pops went camping,
Just around dark we heard some clanging and banging,
Pops looked to see what the noise was out there,
In a whisper he said 'It's a big brown bear',
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Roseann Shawiak 01 April 2015

Quiet humor! Especially enjoyed the surprise ending! Great poem! Sign of a great humorous poem is making people laugh out loud! I definitely did, couldn't hold the laughter in! Fantastic poem! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 01 April 2015

Quietly humorous, surprise ending! A great poem! Absolutely made me laugh out loud! A sign of a really good poem with humor - making people laugh! Thank you for sharing this one. RoseAnn

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Annie Girl 17 December 2009

haha... awsome write.....

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**paris* forever forgotten** 16 December 2009

lol i hear that! ! thats cute.

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