Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Laced With Silver Comments

Rating: 5.0

My hair is laced with silver now
For time has seized my youth
I’ve lost the count of seasons passed -
The mirror shows the truth
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Valerie Dohren
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Kevin Patrick 15 January 2014

At first I thought this was going to be a very sad and melancholy piece but then you managed to imbue it with optimism and gentility at the face of natures change of fashions. stunning, as long as you have the heart of a child you can always sing. Great piece.

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Joseph Anderson 11 January 2014

A splendid tribute to ageing, penned with grace and a wistful thankfullness.. There was beauty in its remakable flow

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Susy Evelyne 10 January 2014

What a beautifully crafted poem. A joy to read, Valerie. And you make grey hairs sound so glamorous!

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Mac Adrone Adonay 02 January 2014

I truly enjoyed reading this poem, beautiful.. nice rhythm.

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Patricia Grantham 02 January 2014

Another beautiful write Valerie. A good read to bring the new year in. A head laced with silver but a heart inlaid with gold. You so warmly penned words with such beauty and wisdom. Youth will not last forever but love and wisdom will endure! Enjoyed.

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Matt Mooney 01 January 2014

All the way a beautiful poem from a woman's heart.

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John Brown 16 December 2013

Another beautiful poem Val - I love it. It has a musical quality to it also.

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Unwritten Soul 14 December 2013

Wow.......laced with silver, your life graced by being a winner! but your medal is more than gold...and i give you that for this fine poetry_Soul

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Dave Walker 13 December 2013

A great poem, I too still feel youthful inside, but now my body shows the battle scars of life.

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Om Chawla 13 December 2013

Enjoyed reading this very wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing this lovely write. I have added this to my favourite poems.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 December 2013

Yet in my heart there is a space Where time does not accrue - Where youthfulness does ever shine And all the world is new Very positive poem to feel youthful once again. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 12 December 2013

Sadness laced with silver hair Brightness shared with shining heart Passion moves with freedom wings And youthful heart blessed with golden thoughts

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Hazel Durham 12 December 2013

To be young at heart is to shine forever with joy of living and giving back your wisdom of experience that all life still has to offer! Beautiful write!

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