Friday, May 1, 2020

Labour Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

one who lays brick after brick
to make you a house
deserves a decent house too
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Nosheen Irfan
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Susan Williams 08 June 2020

You touched the heart with those examples==with the pandemic, we are seeing the importance and essentialness of many many jobs that have often been taken for granted- -the stocker at the grocery store, the garbage man, the UPS man, the plumber and the list goes on. Maybe this virus will instill some much needed humility and thankfulness in people. 10+++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 May 2020

A vivid picture of labourer has been satutely delineated by you on account of labour day. Actually labourers are leading risky lives. Brilliant inscription.10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

Wow a great inspiring tribute to all manual and menial workers that are vital to society as we need them so much and yes rich people ESP should help them out in return. Kudos for a compassionate poem. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, ' miraculous birds seen in sacred sanctuary'

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 May 2020

A well conveyed message in excellent composition.....10+++

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