Wednesday, January 29, 2020

Laborer's Brainchild, The Nine -Arch Bridge Comments

Rating: 4.3

Its a bridge, bridging a gap hundred meters wide
its a bridge meant to link two large mountains
its a bridge, to cross a stream nearly thirty meters below
its a bridge none ever thought would amuse the world
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Navod Dilhara 31 January 2020

Enjoyed the poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Jayatissa K Liyanage 31 January 2020

Thank you Dilhara

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Palitha Ranatunge 30 January 2020

Thank you for sharing. Wonderfully penned after a long silence!

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Jayatissa K Liyanage 31 January 2020

Thank you Palitha

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2020

A wonderful story beautifully conveyed and crafted. Very inspiring. I will read next time the Poet's Notes. A lot of advertisements blocked the poem and Poet's Notes making them inaccessible to readers. I have to go through several times on this beautiful poem just to read but the time spent is worth after reading this enlightening write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2020

Sometimes if we put our heart, mind and trust in our work, we can make something people could rely on for many years even beyond time. A great work need not be done by highly skilled or highly educated man. It is enough that we dedicate ourselves and put all our efforts on the work we aimed to do and make a difference.

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KL Jayatissa 29 January 2020

Thank you Rose for your generous comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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