Wednesday, February 23, 2005

La Tour Eiffel Comments

Rating: 2.3

So, I look down from liberating heights
into the boulevard of a French morning.
And for those doubting Thomases, not gallic:
Yes, it does sway, enough to squeeze your sphincter.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Rich Hanson 23 February 2005

Made me feel I was there, sway and all. Well done.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 23 February 2005

Monsieur Lawrence: Merci! I haven't heard anything as nice as this in 18 days. If not more. Sandra is on the female side, they do have a distinct advantage in loveliness. H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 23 February 2005

Okay, Michael Eagleeye, found two, is busies the other one? How do you spell that busys? Wait until I find the first one in yours...... H

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Lenchen Elf 23 February 2005

'The wind has lied to kiss an early night, I need to jump to stop embarrassing my soul, ' What can I say, I wish I'd written those lines: -)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 23 February 2005

Sandra, what can I say? Your words are bagbalm for my soul. Thank you so much! H

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Sandra Osborne 23 February 2005

Beautiful, Excellent. One of the best poems I have ever read, period. Damn you a tallented man.10+++

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