Tuesday, June 26, 2007

La Rosa De La Muerte Comments

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La rosa de la murete
Es la mas bonita de todas
La negra rosa
el color mas ermosa de todas
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Juan Olivarez 10 June 2011

Muerte is mispelled, you wrote murete, Hermosa has an h at the beginning, The word bamos does not exist in the spanish language, and your last sentence is complete gibberish. Other than that it's a pretty bad poem.

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