La Moribunda (The Withered One) Comments

This is really impressive! I've thought about writing poems directly in Spanish before, but the task seems so difficult and I'm nowhere near success on that one! It's thought provoking, beautifully structured and carries a great rhythm, so job well done

Pues, mi español es peor que lo de Aria y espero que tenga tu abilidad en las lenguas también. Gonna admit I wrote a spanish poem in 2011 and yeah other languages+making poetrt = quite difficult. Well done, if I was a native speaker I would comment on the flow and the ease of reading but I'm not obviously so oh well. But it's a fine set of ideas and a theme which suits getting older so that's a plus +++++

Me gusta la cancion. Las palabras estan hermosa. Lo siento mi espanol es muy horrible'. So I'm gonna switch to english. I quite like this. The last verse is thought provoking and pensive. Very well done. I wish I had your talent for language. -Aria