Friday, June 14, 2013

La Budget Guillotine! Comments

Rating: 3.9

Be prepared, ye mortals!
for old though renewed sacrifices
dreams, desires, hopes, plans,
cuts,
...
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Shahzia Batool
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Passionate Reader 18 June 2013

The poem speaks so well the existing situation... again with a solid and strong message. Deep observation! ! ! Dickens 'A Tale of Two Cities' immediately came to my mind when i read the title. You have skillfully used Guillotine here. Very innovative and impressive! ! ! The whole scene came to my mind after reading this well crafted work. Well done! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 15 June 2013

A great metaphorical poem, Shahzia, nice and enjoyable!

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Yasmin Khan 15 June 2013

Prevailing situation written powerfully in a not very lengthy composition with easy diction so can reach to everyone.

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Indira Babbellapati 14 June 2013

An yearly rigmarole; the average look forward to concessions in vain...honest tax payer forever victim: (

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Wahab Abdul 14 June 2013

110 is the number of parliament members? however, budget cuts and cut the fund which used to for the development of children under ten....a bad and nasty thing they done, its a strong poem with strong message, i like it...10

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Shahzia Batool

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