Friday, February 6, 2009

L.O.V.E Comments

Rating: 5.0

L.ost in your heart,
in the moment of your departure,
in the feeling you won't come back again,
and that I won't be able to love anymore.
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Ana Z. M.
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 06 April 2009

its really just love hehe... magnificent write ana very much indeed -mel

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Pink Butterfly ... 16 February 2009

Being in love is such an amazing thing, but sometimes it is better to set your heart free. You are just a year younger than me. And you are so young to experience such pain. I wish someday you would heal. -pink butterfly-

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Paul Henry Dallaire 09 February 2009

Ana. This poem would make such a great song. So young too experience such affection. I just loved it. good luck. Paul

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Tom Golding 07 February 2009

Well thought out. Every young girl's hopes and fears. Keep writing

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Angel Jimenez 07 February 2009

This word can cause happiness and sadness at the same time.......excellent poem. keep it up 10+

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Bonnie Collins 06 February 2009

Very touching write about the depth of your heart's love.... Enjoyed the construction you have given this with he creativity of the word LOVE.... Bonnie

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