Thursday, May 5, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

Watching lightning snake across the sky.
Raining pour over my head, but my eyes dry.
They guide me to the well, dry
Lay me down to the bottom, PRAY
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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