Élégie Pour Les Papillons Comments

Ahmad, for a moment, as I finished reading, I thought you had written a farewell, an 'At Last You're Gone' tribute to the once so-called President George Bush of the United States of America. Music going from crashing thunder to a peaceful finale embellished with hope: another day, a new dawning. May it be so! Your poems are always a joy to read. Carol

sweet like never seen.....sounds like hearin a piano music while goin thr the lines.....10+++ sebastine

Great pouring forth your heart!

A very good traditional tribute, like a piano composing, good write Ahmed,10+

Nice flow running through this Ahmed...good tribute...10+

such a wonderful tribute flowing through rhythmic verses