Sunday, December 3, 2006

(l) 6 (My Baby) A New Way Of Life Comments

Rating: 3.4

As the nightingale sings its song
And the serpent slides into where it belongs
The fox after its feast gets up and yawns
The cuckoo croons and sings to the swans
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Preeti - is here! 06 December 2006

It's like nature mingling with your praises for her. (talking about your pincess i suppose?) . Lovely! Preets

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Duncan Wyllie 04 December 2006

She is like a vision to the blind Solution to all riddles you will find My love for her is as measureless as the sky Beautiful writing Love duncan X

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An absolutely enchanting piece of work, resonant with the hope and freshness of nature, which is so eloquently and appropriately invoked through this engaging, uplifting piece. Well done, TO. t x

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Ernestine Northover 03 December 2006

Wonderful opening line, and great lines to follow. Lovely work. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Patricia Gale 03 December 2006

Beautiful imagery, it lightens this cold weather we are having. Splendid piece filled with admiration.

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