Thursday, October 19, 2006

(l) 5 (My Baby) My Inner Sun Comments

Rating: 3.7

You flew in softly and tiptoed in my life
My parched soul got a reprieve
My heart is now your permanent home
We shall play with elves and gnomes
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Ntando 26 February 2021

This made me cry ♥️

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David Gerardino 28 October 2006

We shall play with elves and gnomes, makes the poem........10

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Perfect; serene, flowing, adoring, glowing with love. Warming to read and finely penned. t x

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Ruby Root 21 October 2006

What a beautiful poem Tranquil. I love it. Excellently written. Take care.

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Geoff Warden 19 October 2006

what a heart sent message here......such lines of image......well skipted T.O.

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Joshua Fegley 19 October 2006

Very well written and articulated Tranquil. Laters.....Joshua.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 October 2006

T.O.>>>Gorgeous, warm tale of aMother's Love, so it appears to me....Perhaps your's....Smooth, & serne & garnered with a wealth of Passio....Splendid job T.O., AS ALWAYS FROM YOU'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Asma Bahrainwala 19 October 2006

a perfect beauty! .. a wonderful expression of feelings... elves n gnomes, n stars doing a slow tambourine dance...creates such a supernatural ambience... i loved this 1, TO... Asma...

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David Darbyshire 19 October 2006

very nice tran Q dave............................: -)

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