Thursday, June 1, 2006

Kyle Collins Comments

Rating: 5.0

Kyle is my 21/2
Year old grandson, he
Loves to come over
Every day of the week, for he
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Tracey Collins
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Patricia Gale 02 June 2006

Very clever Tracey. Well done! Patricia

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Michael Gale 02 June 2006

It's colorfully written... I enjoyed T his S onnet about Kyle, C ause it is U tterly T errific and E veryone, as well S hould H ope for A verse of R hyming E xcellance-well D eserved... N icely done and it's O riginally executed. ? God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

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Lisa Wilkinson 02 June 2006

I love the way you've enhanced his name down the side like I did in my colourful rainbow poem.Clever stuff.Chat soon.xx

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Geoff Warden 01 June 2006

Space and time Thats all there is............oh don't forget..................

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TRACEY...QUITE UNIQUELY WRITTEN...THE CLINCHER TO MUSE UPON IS THE ALLUDEMENT TO ''NOBODY'S SPACES''...A NICELY SOUNDING COLLOQUIAL TO A VERY SWEET TRIBUTAL...JOB WELL DONE, TRACEY! '''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Duncan Wyllie 01 June 2006

Now this I like, i think that you have said all that needs to be said about the shear wonder of a young baby: Loves to Laugh In Nobody`s Spaces. What a wonderful way of expessing this, My own two girls have brought us so much joy over the years thankyou for the memories, love duncan X

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