Krishna Comments

I enjoyed this poem and the following lines most: 'you are the child in the cosmos egg, rolling in space bathed and showered in the layers of colours'

Great Devotion to the Greatest Soul, all included. thanks for sharing 10+

Emanate to a Godly feel, I love to read more from this talented poetess you are the child in the cosmos egg, rolling in space bathed and showered in the layers of colours and sound and radiance abound bewithching in your beauty you are the smile Young

luvd it......nice work....keep goin... check mine tooo

Jyothi! ......you are Meera! 10 sathya narayana

It ends well if it begins well. U started with a divine touch. Good piece. Keep going.

Hi Jyoti, Namaskaar - A subtle write with shades of divinity. A good read. Keep it up...