On Commercial Road see them walk up and down
The beautiful women of old Koroit Town
Some partnered or married with children and some single in their prime
Koroit's beauties the inspiration of stories and rhyme
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Wow a unique poem appreciating the beautiful women, a creation of God for the lucky men esp if beauty is coupled with the down to earth trait so hard to find these days. Yor rhyming was pleasing and wording all smile engendering. Kudos. Pls do comment my latest poem called POETRY COMMENTARY EXPOSURE.......